You are working for a company. You need to take some time off work and want to ask your manager about this.Write a letter to your manager. In your letter:explain why you want to take time off workgive details of the amount of time you needsuggest how your

Essay topics:

You are working for a company. You need to take some time off work and want to ask your manager about this.

Write a letter to your manager. In your letter:

explain why you want to take time off work

give details of the amount of time you need

suggest how your work could be covered while you are away

Write at least 150 words.

Dear Sir/Madame,

I want to get your attention in an issue that not only limiting my performance but also for my team. For last couple of months workload was tremendous for me and for my team members. The target that has been set for me which I have completed successfully by working crazy hours for last couple of months. so, I think I need to take some time off work to perform my optimum level.

I only need 2 days at most in this purpose. I hope I will come back soon to join my team. As our target is completed so workload is now just regular. but if something come up while I am not here than I can assure you my team member can handle works efficiently and effectively.

As I have mentioned the reason why I need to take time of I want your consideration on this matter. I hope you will understand and sanction me a time off for 2 days.

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I look forward to listen from you soon.

yours Sincerely,

Md. Nazim Uddin

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 306, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
... crazy hours for last couple of months. so, I think I need to take some time off w...
^^
Line 9, column 151, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: But
...pleted so workload is now just regular. but if something come up while I am not her...
^^^
Line 9, column 220, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e I am not here than I can assure you my team member can handle works efficiently...
^^
Line 17, column 16, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to listening'.
Suggestion: to listening
...ionfrom'>from I look forward to listen from you soon. yours Sincerely,...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 23, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Yours
...orward to listen from you soon. yours Sincerely, Md. Nazim Uddin
^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, while, i think

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 841.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 180.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67222222222 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.7222352941 2.54303337028 186% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.627777777778 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 250.2 290.88556701 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.306171738 44.8134815571 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.0833333333 76.5299724578 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0 16.8248392259 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.25 4.34317383033 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.30620753372 0.216113520407 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106364615971 0.0766984524023 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0939378330628 0.0603063233224 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153535085552 0.12726935374 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.141098602983 0.0580467560999 243% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 8.37731958763 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.21 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.75 7.59969072165 89% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 41.2886597938 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.