You live in an English speaking country and you want to do some voluntary, unpaid work in a developing country. Write a letter to a company called Cultural Expeditions, which organizes such trips. In your letter:
Explain why you want to do the voluntary work.
State what your skills and experience are.
Indicate where you would like to volunteer and for how long.
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing this letter because I received a flyer stats that your company organizes trips to developing country to do some voluntary work. I am really exciting about this opportunity.
I came from London, and am a England citizen. I've been longing for a long time trip since I am in elementary school. I am always want to be a journalist, so I have to be in part of the world. To accomplish this goal, I have to experience a lot, know how people feel and communicate in their world and culture. I want to dive into their lives to know more about their happiness, their pain and their thinkings.
Ok, enough about the purpose of me. Since it is about volunteer, I should have some skills to finish the work and really helping people in developing country, do I. Well, I excise a lot, so I can easily laying bricks to build a library or house. I can be a English teacher cause I am native English speaker. I can also cook for workers or children there. You can assign me to any of those works, but I prefer teaching, because that is the filed I can maximize my value.
It seems you have three location to choose from, right? I would like to work in the south east of asia, I really interested in culture there. I am having gap year since February of this year, so I can be volunteer for almost a year from now.
Looking forward for your replay,
Di
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...lly exciting about this opportunity. I came from London, and am a England citi...
^
Line 5, column 28, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ortunity. I came from London, and am a England citizen. Ive been longing for a...
^
Line 5, column 47, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I've
... from London, and am a England citizen. Ive been longing for a long time trip since...
^^^
Line 5, column 130, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'wanted'.
Suggestion: wanted
... I am in elementary school. I am always want to be a journalist, so I have to be in ...
^^^^
Line 7, column 204, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'lay'
Suggestion: lay
.... Well, I excise a lot, so I can easily laying bricks to build a library or house. I c...
^^^^^^
Line 7, column 256, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...s to build a library or house. I can be a English teacher cause I am native Engli...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, look, really, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 32.9175257732 131% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 26.3917525773 136% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1124.0 937.175257732 120% => OK
No of words: 258.0 206.0 125% => OK
Chars per words: 4.35658914729 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47859655833 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 127.690721649 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565891472868 0.622605031667 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 356.4 290.88556701 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.13402061856 175% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6804123711 134% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.7825673236 44.8134815571 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.1176470588 76.5299724578 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1764705882 16.8248392259 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.94117647059 4.34317383033 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165940694065 0.216113520407 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0453829738046 0.0766984524023 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0674831046824 0.0603063233224 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0924229361993 0.12726935374 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0705493880331 0.0580467560999 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.7 8.37731958763 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.42 8.71597938144 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.71 7.59969072165 88% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.