You have an appointment with your manager the next day Write a letter telling him her what you are going to discuss in the meeting In your letter you should tell what you have done for the company in the year you worked there what changes you would like t

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You have an appointment with your manager the next day. Write a letter telling him/her what you are going to discuss in the meeting.

In your letter, you should tell:
- what you have done for the company in the year you worked there?
- what changes you would like to recommend?
- what training you require?

Dear Steve,

I am writing this letter to inform you about the agenda of tomorrow's meeting.
firstly, I would like to tell you that i am working as an assistant manager finance in this organization for last 5 years. I am handling the accounts of the entire office which includes income tax returns, annual filing, book keeping and banking.

Secondly, I want a few changes in my department which are necessary to improve our day to day accounting. In order to maintain full fledged books, we need a better software as Tally prime is not suitable for large organizations like us. Apart from this, I also want some new recruitments in my team to strengthen our database management.

Finally, despite inclusion of an upgraded accounting software, advance excel training is required for finance department inclunding myself. It will not only enhance the analytical skills of employees but also be beneficial for preparation and maintenance of expense tracker.

Thanks and regards
Roger

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Firstly
...about the agenda of tomorrows meeting. firstly, I would like to tell you that i am wor...
^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 40, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... firstly, I would like to tell you that i am working as an assistant manager fina...
^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, second, secondly, so, then, apart from

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.85567010309 259% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 834.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 161.0 206.0 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1801242236 4.54256449028 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56210296601 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88333926323 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.732919254658 0.622605031667 118% => OK
syllable_count: 258.3 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.9301542925 44.8134815571 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.6666666667 76.5299724578 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8888888889 16.8248392259 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.22222222222 4.34317383033 189% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171066435379 0.216113520407 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0626662993426 0.0766984524023 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0888588952198 0.0603063233224 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110271213322 0.12726935374 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0751654204837 0.0580467560999 129% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 8.37731958763 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 70.7449484536 77% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 8.71597938144 143% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.97 7.59969072165 131% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 41.2886597938 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Firstly
...about the agenda of tomorrows meeting. firstly, I would like to tell you that i am wor...
^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 40, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... firstly, I would like to tell you that i am working as an assistant manager fina...
^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, second, secondly, so, then, apart from

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.85567010309 259% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 834.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 161.0 206.0 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1801242236 4.54256449028 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56210296601 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88333926323 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.732919254658 0.622605031667 118% => OK
syllable_count: 258.3 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.9301542925 44.8134815571 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.6666666667 76.5299724578 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8888888889 16.8248392259 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.22222222222 4.34317383033 189% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171066435379 0.216113520407 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0626662993426 0.0766984524023 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0888588952198 0.0603063233224 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110271213322 0.12726935374 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0751654204837 0.0580467560999 129% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 8.37731958763 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 70.7449484536 77% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 8.71597938144 143% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.97 7.59969072165 131% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 41.2886597938 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.