Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to ask you about whether some goods I need are available at your store, or if you are able to order them from another source.
I am working on an electrical project for access control of a room and for that, I am running out of some diodes, capacitors and transistors that are necessary to drive the motor responsible for opening the main door. I have already tried to find these components in some specific stores in my city and at some from the downtown, and all of them told me that I would be able to find only at your shop.
As I need to show all the expenses to my boss, could you please send me a quote for each one you have, listing the prices and lead time? How long would you be able to hold the goods after you get the payment confirmation?
Yours faithfully,
Viegas
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 219, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... responsible for opening the main door. I have already tried to find these compon...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 671.0 937.175257732 72% => OK
No of words: 155.0 206.0 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.32903225806 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52844152537 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36585140311 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 127.690721649 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.625806451613 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 207.9 290.88556701 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6804123711 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 16.3608247423 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.9444199274 44.8134815571 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.833333333 76.5299724578 146% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8333333333 16.8248392259 154% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.0 4.34317383033 23% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.30965241127 0.216113520407 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.14665862309 0.0766984524023 191% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.119635762025 0.0603063233224 198% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.22240809966 0.12726935374 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.059837717156 0.0580467560999 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 8.37731958763 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.48 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.13 8.71597938144 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.32 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 24.0 41.2886597938 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 8.62886597938 214% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 12.0 8.54432989691 140% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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