You have heard that a developer plans to build a shopping center near your home. Write a letter to the council:
- How you heard about the plan?
- Explain how you feel about it?
- Ask for more information about it?
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter in context to the proposed plan of building a shopping center in the Wychwood area where I presently live.
I came across this construction plan while listening to the news on a local radio channel, which informed the audience about the builder's name, who is intending to build a commercial shopping street for the local public.
I am extremely overwhelmed with the idea of building a shopping plaza here as there is no such one-roof complex for the people in the area, due to which they travel to long distances to buy daily routine items, which is too inconvenient.
As a curious citizen, I would like to know when the construction will get over and the opening ceremony date. Apart from this, does the shopping complex include local products or branded items, as the people here are brand conscious.
I shall be looking forward to your response.
Yours faithfully,
Hannah Montana
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ping street for the local public. I am extremely overwhelmed with the idea ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, while, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 32.9175257732 36% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 797.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 158.0 206.0 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04430379747 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.54539209256 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62804595485 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 127.690721649 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.670886075949 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 232.2 290.88556701 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 72.6102258498 44.8134815571 162% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.857142857 76.5299724578 149% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5714285714 16.8248392259 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.28571428571 4.34317383033 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151127026299 0.216113520407 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0602621857013 0.0766984524023 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0556054600199 0.0603063233224 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0778334679573 0.12726935374 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0609067289466 0.0580467560999 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 8.37731958763 162% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 70.7449484536 81% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 8.71597938144 141% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 7.59969072165 115% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 8.62886597938 203% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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