You have just finished your master’s degree and need to leave your current part-time job to search for full-time employment.
Write a letter to your current employer. In your letter:
– explain why you will not be able to pursue a full-time job in his/her company
– say why you’ve enjoyed working for him/her
– tell him/her how much longer you will continue to work for him/her.
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to put light on the news of a job offer I recently received. As I have completed my final term at college and can devote more time to work, I will be leaving Cooper Inc. as a part-time trainee.
Working for the organization as a part-time trainee was an impeccable experience for me. All the office staff was amicable, and the work environment was encouraging. I would be delighted to work for Cooper Inc. as a full-time employee, but I am afraid it might hamper with my prospect of gaining varied knowledge. Also, the new job comes with a hefty financial benefit, which is hard to refuse.
As per my appointment letter, the joining date is 15th May. So the last day of my work at Cooper Inc. would be 12th May. I request you to clear all my documentation work before stipulated time to avoid the last-minute rush.
I am thanking you in advance.
Yours sincerely,
Rachana
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- Some people believe that face to face communication is always more powerful than written communication To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement Give your own opinion and include relevant examples 73
- Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish Why do you think this is happening What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced 78
- Some people believe that face to face communication is always more powerful than written communication To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement Give your own opinion and include relevant examples 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 241, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...Cooper Inc. as a full-time employee, but I am afraid it might hamper with my pros...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, may, so, i am afraid
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 32.9175257732 58% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 26.3917525773 61% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 762.0 937.175257732 81% => OK
No of words: 165.0 206.0 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.61818181818 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58402463422 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76024512825 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 127.690721649 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.642424242424 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 234.9 290.88556701 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 16.3608247423 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.2154735289 44.8134815571 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 54.4285714286 76.5299724578 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 11.7857142857 16.8248392259 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.21428571429 4.34317383033 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228247623401 0.216113520407 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0771487584734 0.0766984524023 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0525434673974 0.0603063233224 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117932348012 0.12726935374 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0543862899048 0.0580467560999 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.2 8.37731958763 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.23 70.7449484536 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.63 8.71597938144 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.4 8.54432989691 75% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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