You have just finished your Master’s degree and need to leave your current part-time job to search for full-time employment.
Write a letter to your current employer. In your letter:
– explain why you will not be able to pursue a full-time job in his/her company
– say why you’ve enjoyed working for him/her
– tell him/her how much longer you will continue to work for him/her.
Dear Sir,
I am Lina one of your staff from the burger king branch in the kalasha shopping mall. I am writing this letter to inform you regarding my last day for this part-time job.
As you are aware I was doing my Masters in marketing, I completed my course next month it’s May 2021. I want to take approval from you to approve my resignation letter as I want to go for a full-time job in Tikopia from 1st June as a marketing head. I was unable to continue my job here as I see there is no growth for my sector in your organization.
I learned a lot from the current job in your company, how to handle customers, how to work on pressure and stress, how to help each other when we are sick, how to take a lead role if customer all together coming and complaint about some food items and so many. All these lessons learned to make me grow more stronger and confident will help me in my further carries.
Lastly, I want to inform you that I can continue in my current role till End of May, so please help to approve my letter of resignation and could you please help to provide my experience letter with conduct certificate.
I look forward to hearing from you at your earliest convince. Thank you in advance for your kind cooperation.
Yours sincerely,
Lima
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, I am Lina one of your staff from the bur...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...th for my sector in your organization. I learned a lot from the current job in y...
^
Line 7, column 303, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'stronger' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: stronger
...l these lessons learned to make me grow more stronger and confident will help me in my furthe...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 14, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ur kind cooperation. Yours sincerely, Lima
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, lastly, look, may, regarding, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 32.9175257732 131% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 26.3917525773 140% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1047.0 937.175257732 112% => OK
No of words: 238.0 206.0 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.39915966387 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47536053686 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 127.690721649 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.579831932773 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 321.3 290.88556701 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.7755166794 44.8134815571 151% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.1818181818 76.5299724578 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6363636364 16.8248392259 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.27272727273 4.34317383033 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283911182141 0.216113520407 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119855610011 0.0766984524023 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0608622390767 0.0603063233224 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160016502483 0.12726935374 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0616742098497 0.0580467560999 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 8.37731958763 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 70.7449484536 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.24 8.71597938144 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.53 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.