You missed an important meeting at work Write a letter to your manager In the letter Apologize for not going Explain why you were not there Say how you will make up for it

Essay topics:

You missed an important meeting at work. Write a letter to your manager. In the letter:
· Apologize for not going
· Explain why you were not there
· Say how you will make up for it.

Dear Sir,

I am writing this letter to apologize for the board meeting I missed today morning at 9 am about the current project status update.

I am sorry for not attending the meeting. I was aware of how important it is, but I was absent.

The reason behind this is, today father got a high BP around 7 am. Due to this, I accompany him to the hospital for a medical check-up and other medical tests that are required. Then we visited the doctor and bought the medicines required. Thank god he is doing fine then drop him back at home, now on the way to the office.

I know the importance of the meeting, so I informed Mr. Atwal to attend the meeting on half of me to take notes. I will review with him today once I reach the office. I will check all the action items, responsible PIC along with timelines, and will submit the final report on your table by today's EOD.

I hope you will accept my apologies and forgive my absence.

Yours Sincerely,
Smith

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Dear Sir, I am writing this letter to apologize fo...
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Message: This is a non-standard collocation. Normally, 'this morning' is used.
Suggestion: this morning
...pologize for the board meeting I missed today morning at 9 am about the current project statu...
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...am sorry for not attending the meeting. I was aware of how important it is, but ...
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... I was aware of how important it is, but I was absent. The reason behind this ...
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...I know the importance of the meeting, so I informed Mr. Atwal to attend the meeti...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...with him today once I reach the office. I will check all the action items, respon...
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...ck all the action items, responsible PIC along with timelines, and will submit th...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... report on your table by todays EOD. I hope you will accept my apologies and f...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, so, then

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 795.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 181.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.39226519337 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.2991525347 2.54303337028 90% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.668508287293 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 247.5 290.88556701 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.9759681715 44.8134815571 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.25 76.5299724578 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0833333333 16.8248392259 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.08333333333 4.34317383033 25% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22440029777 0.216113520407 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0644724050066 0.0766984524023 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0546222115731 0.0603063233224 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116283512074 0.12726935374 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0554209455239 0.0580467560999 95% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.8 8.37731958763 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.59 8.71597938144 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.17 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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