You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that the noise may disturb your neighbour.
Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter
introduce yourself
describe your plans for the party
invite your neighbour to come
Dear Ann,
My name is Lilian Okoye and I am your new next door neighbour. I moved in two days ago into the neighbourhood. I am writing this letter to inform you about my scheduled house warming party fixed for next Saturday, 26th November as I would really love for you to attend.
It is a special occasion with my close friends and relatives to celebrate my new home. There party will commence by 8pm and continue till midnight. There will be lots of music and dancing and a local music band will be performing. Dessert will be served at 8pm after the performance in the garden.
I initially wanted to invite you over the phone but I considered that it’d be more appropriate to write you a letter of invitation. This would be a perfect opportunity to get acquainted with you so please make out time to attend. However, if you can’t, we could schedule another time to meet and greet. Although, I am a bit worried about the noise that would come from the party and I apologize in advance for any inconveniences this might cause.
I would be genuinely pleased if you could accept my invitation and I look forward to seeing you.
Yours sincerely,
Faith.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, really, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 4.92783505155 244% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 973.0 937.175257732 104% => OK
No of words: 209.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65550239234 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63782642491 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 127.690721649 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622009569378 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 298.8 290.88556701 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.736387005 44.8134815571 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.8461538462 76.5299724578 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0769230769 16.8248392259 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.61538461538 4.34317383033 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24926692618 0.216113520407 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0834998134385 0.0766984524023 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0684135040115 0.0603063233224 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130126989211 0.12726935374 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0849285231989 0.0580467560999 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 8.37731958763 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.45 8.71597938144 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.