You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that the noise may disturb your neighbour.
Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter
introduce yourself
describe your plans for the party
invite your neighbour to come
Dear Sir,
I am Anand, recently moved to your next flat. I am writing this letter to let you know about the celebration in our residence. Please allow me to explain.
As my wedding anniversary is on tomorrow, we have planned a get-together with our family members and office colleagues. This would also give us a chance to invite our relatives and friends to our new home.
We want the event to be colorful and ensure that it brings vivid memories to us in the future. For that matter, we have reached an event management team for organizing the celebration. They have come up with a plan to play some music to make the party engaging.
However, it might create disturbance for you. Kindly please bear with us. We will ensure that music is played in low decibel so that it doesn't create much annoyance to you.
I would also like you to join the party with your family. The party starts at 6 PM tomorrow. Hoping to see you there.
Yours sincerely,
Anand.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 136, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'give'
Suggestion: give
...s and office collegues. This would also gives us a chance to invite our relatives and...
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Line 9, column 137, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...sic is played in low decibel so that it doesnt create much annoyance to you. I woul...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, so, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 800.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 174.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.59770114943 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46006551025 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 127.690721649 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.655172413793 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 249.3 290.88556701 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 16.3608247423 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.2541824473 44.8134815571 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 53.3333333333 76.5299724578 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 11.6 16.8248392259 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.8 4.34317383033 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259590545978 0.216113520407 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0816455956682 0.0766984524023 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0690500261039 0.0603063233224 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122494398632 0.12726935374 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0602541446346 0.0580467560999 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.0 8.37731958763 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.23 70.7449484536 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.22 8.71597938144 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.45 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.4 8.54432989691 75% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.