You have missed some important papers accidently in a taxi.Write a letter to the manager of the Taxi company. In your letter:⦁ Give the details of your journey⦁ Explain why those papers are important for you⦁ Suggest what can the manager do

Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing regarding my documents, which I forgot by accident, in a salon of one of your taxies.

The ride was early this morning, at half past seven, from Borispil Airport to the Kiev train station. I was rushing to get on time on my train to Odessa and left a folder with important papers inside the cab. Unfortunately, I noticed the loss only after train’s departure, so I could not get back to the taxi.

It would be much appreciated if you, as a manager of the company, could help me in solving the issue. Namely, you can contact the driver and upon discovery of the documents, to arrange its delivery to my home. I am ready to cover all expenses.
I will enclose to this email my mailing address and a message, which I received from the call-centre when I ordered a cab. It contains the number of the car, its brand and colour. As for the folder, it is red in colour, made of plastic, the documents inside are my diplomas and transcripts.

Please contact me on my number, 234599, as soon as you will find my papers.

Yours Sincerely,

Angela Tinley

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Average: 8.7 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 8, column 205, Rule ID: ADJECTIVE_IN_ATTRIBUTE[1]
Message: A more concise phrase may lose no meaning and sound more powerful.
Suggestion: red
...nd and colour. As for the folder, it is red in colour, made of plastic, the documents inside ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, regarding, so, as for

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 904.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 198.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.56565656566 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63622817873 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.636363636364 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 279.0 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.3145546268 44.8134815571 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.3333333333 76.5299724578 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5 16.8248392259 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.08333333333 4.34317383033 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128502752902 0.216113520407 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0424484611938 0.0766984524023 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.038990318667 0.0603063233224 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0576390330716 0.12726935374 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0357728954003 0.0580467560999 62% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 8.37731958763 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.93 8.71597938144 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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