You have missed some important papers accidently in a taxi.Write a letter to the manager of the Taxi company. In your letter:⦁ Give the details of your journey⦁ Explain why those papers are important for you⦁ Suggest what can the manager do

Essay topics:

You have missed some important papers accidently in a taxi.

Write a letter to the manager of the Taxi company. In your letter:

⦁ Give the details of your journey

⦁ Explain why those papers are important for you

⦁ Suggest what can the manager do

Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing you to make a report about lost item in one of your taxi cabs.

Yesterday about 12 pm I called a taxi through Uber mobile application. The journey started after 5 minutes from 404 Ellerslie Panmure highway and I was heading to my work place which is located on Nixon street. The ride was succsessful and about 12-30 pm the taxi delivered me to the mentioned address. When I left the car and its driver has gone I realized that I do not have a folder with important papers and, probably, I missed it in the taxi. this folder has a red color with black stripes holding its cover. The content of it is very precious for one of the ongoing projects at my work.

I would highly appreciate your generosity and outstanding level of the client service if you could find this red folder and message me via email or mobile phone about available options of picking it up. Please do not hesitate to contact me in case you need any extra details.

Faithfully yours,

Max.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing you to make a report about ...
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Line 9, column 135, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'highway' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'highways'.
Suggestion: highways
...er 5 minutes from 404 Ellerslie Panmure highway and I was heading to my work place whic...
^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 449, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...and, probably, I missed it in the taxi. this folder has a red color with black strip...
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Line 17, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...xtra details. Faithfully yours, Max.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 829.0 937.175257732 88% => OK
No of words: 182.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.55494505495 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43363799478 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.681318681319 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 254.7 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.8961376313 44.8134815571 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.9 76.5299724578 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2 16.8248392259 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.2 4.34317383033 5% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184503402357 0.216113520407 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0605603179686 0.0766984524023 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0592023423453 0.0603063233224 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123374876721 0.12726935374 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0247885182063 0.0580467560999 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 8.37731958763 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.11 8.71597938144 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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