Nowadays, people have greater access to fast food.
Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?
Watching for consumer’s demands in the situation of permanently increasing pace of a modern life,
the trend of instantly provided products and services becomes more noticeable. this fact has not left
aside the food industry and lots of fast food points of sale appear on a market as the population
grows. By observing positive and negative sides of increased accessibility to the fast food this essay
will demonstrate the outweigh of drawbacks related to this type of service.
The fast food industry operates in the environment of high competition pressure and its winning
factors are cost and time. fast food meals look very attractive in the conditions of time limited lunch
breaks and the meal prices are lower than minimal hour wage. At this point all the advantages of
fast food are depleted.
Alongside with indisputable attractiveness of the fast food there is a big issue caused by regular
consuming of that type of meals. As a winner of a price competition fast food industry uses the
cheapest sources of ingredients among which are artificial flavorings. Also, the technology of fast
cooking dishes by frying different kind of meat and fish in a big amount of vegetable oil makes the
result totally unhealthy for people. Meanwhile, the increased popularity of fast food become
dangerous for keeping traditional food customs and recipes consistent. More often, inviting guests
we prefer easy solutions from takeaways rather than cooking by ourselves.
this essay discussed that consequences of consuming fast food products tremendously outweigh
their doubtful advantages because on a scale of compare against time and money balances such
precious and non-renewable valuable as health. For people who keep their own health as the main
asset but for whom time is a crucial factor as well, I would recommend finding via Internet a
subscription for everyday delivery of healthy and tasty meals.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, well, while, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1656.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.39413680782 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88705945711 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612377850163 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 501.3 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.931765273 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.384615385 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6153846154 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.46153846154 7.06120827912 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 21.0 4.38176352705 479% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 18.0 5.01903807615 359% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272849303234 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.1043690591 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0821749318727 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0811662181746 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0697250956372 0.056905535591 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.28 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.46 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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