You have recently moved to a different house. Write a letter to an English speaking friend. In your letter:
Explain why you have moved
Describe the new house
Invite your friend to come and visit.
Dear Jack,
I hope this letter find you in a radiant of health and the best of spirit. I am writing this letter to let you know that we have been moved recently to a new house.
Actually, we had some problems in our last apartment where was too cramped for us especial specially since my son was born. Besides, in recent months several problems had come up such as leakage of water piping and some cracks on the walls so that a fundamental renovation was crucial for it. By considering my situation surrounding two kids and our grueling schedules we made a decision to move a new house with more space.
Our new house has three bedrooms and two separate living rooms. We have been allocating one of them for playing of children and the other for our relaxation time. The last but not least, it has a magnificent balcony with overlooking to jungle and also a huge barbeque. We usually dine there and enjoy from its breathtaking view.
If you remember my daughter birthday is the last day of April. We want to celebrate it in next weekend and I expect you be here for that day. You are more than welcome to come along with your family. It has been ages since I last saw you. I am assured that we will have an amazing and memorable time trough that day. I am forwarding to hearing from you as soon as possible.
Best Regards,
Sahar
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 329, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...e and enjoy from its breathtaking view. If you remember my daughter birthday is th...
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Line 7, column 6, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...soon as possible. Best Regards, Sahar
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, besides, but, if, look, so, as to, such as, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 32.9175257732 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1090.0 937.175257732 116% => OK
No of words: 248.0 206.0 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.39516129032 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41763379646 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 127.690721649 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616935483871 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 343.8 290.88556701 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.0032550612 44.8134815571 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.125 76.5299724578 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5 16.8248392259 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.25 4.34317383033 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226706354483 0.216113520407 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0717134803917 0.0766984524023 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0736880463125 0.0603063233224 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144872160746 0.12726935374 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0905251359524 0.0580467560999 156% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.0 8.37731958763 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.94 8.71597938144 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.18 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.