You have recently moved to a different house.
Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter
1. Explain why you have moved
2. Describe the new house
3. Invite your friend to come and visit
Write at least 150 words
Dear James,
I'm writing to inform you that I no longer live in my old apartment because I got a new flat two blocks from the one you know.
Last month, my landlord gave all tenants quit notice that he intend to renovate the entire building which will take approximately three months to be completed. As a result, I had to look for new accommodation. In addition, I told you earlier my plan of moving out of my apartment because all the facilities are old fashion making it unreliable and unsafe.
Let me describe my new accommodation in details. It is a three bed flat with modern facilities. The cooking stove consists of three burner plates of different sizes and it’s electric. Also, oven is embedded into it. Furthermore, it has a self regulatory heating system and high speed unlimited internet connection.
Next week Saturday, I'll be organising housing warming party and you are invited. It starts in the evening so don't bother of about timing because I took into consideration that you have to work in the morning. It'll be a perfect opportunity to know my new place and appreciate the facilities am enjoying.
I'll expect to see you then.
Best wishes,
Martin.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
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Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
...rnet connection. Next week Saturday, Ill be organising housing warming party and...
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Line 9, column 110, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...re invited. It starts in the evening so dont bother of about timing because I took i...
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Line 9, column 291, Rule ID: AM_I[1]
Message: Did you mean 'am I'?
Suggestion: am I
...new place and appreciate the facilities am enjoying. Ill expect to see you then...
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Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: ILL_I_LL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
...preciate the facilities am enjoying. Ill expect to see you then. Best wishes,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, look, so, then, in addition, you know, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 992.0 937.175257732 106% => OK
No of words: 204.0 206.0 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86274509804 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81410122517 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 127.690721649 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.68137254902 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 308.7 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.0466877987 44.8134815571 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.8571428571 76.5299724578 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5714285714 16.8248392259 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.21428571429 4.34317383033 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.94845360825 203% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.121271481708 0.216113520407 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0372303991944 0.0766984524023 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0339774205076 0.0603063233224 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0710531768667 0.12726935374 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0239729820825 0.0580467560999 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 8.37731958763 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.32 8.71597938144 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.