You have recently moved to a different house.
Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter
1. Explain why you have moved
2. Describe the new house
3. Invite your friend to come and visit
Write at least 150 words
DEAR TOM,
HELLO,HOW ARE YOU? I HOPE YOU HAVE PERFORMED WELL IN YOUR EXAMS AND ARE NOW ENJOYING YOUR VACATIONS. YOU WILL BE GLAD TO KNOW THAT WE HAVE FINALLY SHIFTED OUR HOUSE.
AS YOU MUST BE KNOWING, THAT WE WERE FACING SOME ISSUES IN THE PREVIOUS BUNGALOW FROM QUITE A LONG TIME. THE GUTTER LINES IN THE SEWAGE SYSTEM WERE CHOKED AND EVEN AFTER REPAIRING IT A COUPLE OF TIMES, WE WERE STILL FACING ISSUES. IN ADDITION TO THIS, THERE WERE LEAKAGE FROM ROOFTOPS IN ALMOST EVERY CORNER OF THE HOUSE. EVEN AFTER REPEATED COMPLAINTS AND REPLACEMENT THE TROUBLESOME SITUATIONS WEREN’T ADDRESSED. THEREFORE, WE DECIDED TO SHIFT SO THAT WE COULD LIVE IN PEACE AND SERENITY.
FORTUNATELY, IN ALMOST A WEEK’S SEARCH WE WERE ABLE TO FIND A PLACE OF OUR CHOICE. OUR NEW MANSION IS JUST NEARBY TO THE BEAUTIFUL EDEN GARDEN.FURTHERMORE, THE HOUSE IS TOO SPACIOUS AND VENTILATED. WE HAVE DECORATED THE HOUSE WITH OUR ANCESTORAL MOMENTOS AND FAMILY PICTURES.
WE HAVE PLANNED TO THROW A HOUSE WARMING PARTY ON THIS CHRISTMAS. WE THOUGHT IT WOULD BE A GREAT OPPORTUNITY TO CELEBRATE AND MEET ALL OUR CLOSED ONES. I WOULD REQUEST YOU TO COME AND JOIN US FOR THE UPCOMING EVENT. I HOPE TO SEE YOU SOON.
REGARDS
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 6, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , HOW
DEAR TOM, HELLO,HOW ARE YOU? I HOPE YOU HAVE PERFORMED WELL...
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Line 5, column 13, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...INALLY SHIFTED OUR HOUSE. AS YOU MUST BE KNOWING, THAT WE WERE FACING SOME ISSUES IN THE...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 72, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... WERE FACING SOME ISSUES IN THE PREVIOUS BUNGALOW FROM QUITE A LONG TIME. THE GUT...
^^
Line 7, column 92, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... ABLE TO FIND A PLACE OF OUR CHOICE. OUR NEW MANSION IS JUST NEARBY TO THE BEAUTI...
^^
Line 9, column 67, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... HOUSE WARMING PARTY ON THIS CHRISTMAS. WE THOUGHT IT WOULD BE A GREAT OPPORTUNITY...
^^
Line 11, column 8, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...EVENT. I HOPE TO SEE YOU SOON. REGARDS
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, furthermore, if, so, still, therefore, well, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1008.0 937.175257732 108% => OK
No of words: 211.0 206.0 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77725118483 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74421088487 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625592417062 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 320.4 290.88556701 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.9201287763 44.8134815571 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.2 76.5299724578 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0666666667 16.8248392259 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 4.34317383033 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141554367715 0.216113520407 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0548063586822 0.0766984524023 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0605847062082 0.0603063233224 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105866956192 0.12726935374 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0933800633883 0.0580467560999 161% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 8.37731958763 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.85 8.71597938144 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.27 7.59969072165 122% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 41.2886597938 160% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.