With the increased global demand in oil and gas, undiscovered areas of the world should be opened up to access more resources.
To what extent do you agree?
It is often argued that undiscovered areas of the earth ought to be explored to meet the rising demand for fossil fuel. I completely disagree with the statement because human invasion into undiscovered places could affect wildlife and agriculture.
The most compelling reason for holding to my view is that human activities in remote areas would disturb the lives of wild animals. Forests that are situated in undiscovered places provide a habitable place for thousand of wildlife. Animals will lose their habitats if humans set up their oil or gas refinery units in the forest. This situation further pushes some endangered animals to the verge of their extinction. Therefore, it is clear that wild animals will possibly lose their homes if forest areas occupied by humans.
Another reason to support my view is that this situation adversely affects agriculture. This is because establishing oil rigs requires cutting down trees and clearing forest landscapes. It is evident that the rainfall we receive these days is because of the tropical forest areas that are located in undiscovered areas. Where there is insufficient precipitation, it will negatively affect the yield of farming. For example, the rainfall rate in India had reduced to 33% to 44% after the government's approval of oil exploration operation in its reserved forest areas. This also had resulted in a decline in the nation's agricultural export to 67% from 83%.
In conclusion, I strongly disagree with the statement that the undiscovered areas around the globe should be explored to meet the increasing need for conventional fuel. This is because it will severely affect the lives of wild animals and lead to deforestation that has an adverse impact on farming.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 212, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a thousand'.
Suggestion: a thousand
...ed places provide a habitable place for thousand of wildlife. Animals will lose their ha...
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Line 9, column 488, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'governments'' or 'government's'?
Suggestion: governments'; government's
...dia had reduced to 33% to 44% after the governments approval of oil exploration operation i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, therefore, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1473.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26071428571 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84254978597 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557142857143 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 24.9224575211 49.4020404114 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 98.2 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6666666667 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.4 7.06120827912 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134402159799 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0447532024476 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0511234852349 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0947522441592 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0380983051579 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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