You have recently started work in a new company.
Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter,
• explain why you changed jobs
• describe your new job
• tell him / her your other news
Write at least 150 words.
You do NOT need to write any address.
Begin your letter as follows:
Dear __________,
Dear Cyrus,
Hope you are well. I have been thinking of getting in touch with you for a long time. Due to my recent change of job and my transition to another city, I have been unable to contact you lately. Anyway, I am glad to finally write to you.
Two months ago, I received an offer from “The Big Group” in Delhi for the position of a PR Manager. They are paying better than my previous company and also allow me to conduct direct sales pitch to their clients. I really love the freedom of taking ownership of branding their products and contribute directly to sales. As of now, I am controlling the brand’s revenue of rupees ten crores.
There’s one more good news that I want you to know. I booked the Toyota Camry 2020 three weeks back and received the delivery yesterday. The car is extremely gorgeous and super comfortable to drive. I am also thinking of taking it for a long drive to Manali soon. I would be happiest if you can join me for the trip.
Do let me know if you have any similar plans. Hope to see you soon.
Regards,
Ahmed
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2020-01-13 | geetha balasubramaniam | 81 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, anyway, but, finally, if, really, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 895.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 198.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.5202020202 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4507806685 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 127.690721649 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.656565656566 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 272.7 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.3582772897 44.8134815571 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 59.6666666667 76.5299724578 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.2 16.8248392259 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.2 4.34317383033 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.94845360825 203% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166084059286 0.216113520407 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.056042743287 0.0766984524023 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0582939916837 0.0603063233224 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117712434787 0.12726935374 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0856916734596 0.0580467560999 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.5 8.37731958763 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.05 8.71597938144 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.