You have recently traveled by plane during the journey you had an issue with one of airline employees. Write a letter to the company manager and say
• Give details of your flight
• Describe the issue you have encountered
• What do you expect the manager to do about it?
Dear Sir/Ma’am,
I am Jacob Brown, a resident of 47 Notting Hill, London. Through this letter, I would like to express my disappointment with the flight crew of your company having flight number UKV1234, from London to Amritsar.
As a matter of fact, I traveled through your airline on 31st April, 2020 on flight bearing number UKV1234 along with my 1-year old son from London to Amritsar. Since I had booked an Indian vegetarian meal, I was assured that I will be getting authentic Indian food. However, during my flight when I was expecting my food the flight crew served me a non-vegetarian meal and on enquiring from the crew member Mr. William conveyed that no such order was placed from my end and started misbehaving with me when I showed him the confirmation email I received while ordering the food.
Having said that, as I was traveling with a toddler, I had no other option to feed my child with the non-vegetarian sandwich and I had to manage my hunger with water. I expect you to not only refund my travel expenses as your crew has exploited my religious view, but also to take necessary action against the crew member. Moreover, I expect an apology from the crew member to be sent to me.
Therefore, I expect a quick retrospective action from your side, otherwise I will be left with no option other than to file a complaint against the crew member and your company. Thanking you in anticipation.
Best regards,
Jacob Brown
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 62, Rule ID: COMMA_MONTH_DATE[1]
Message: The comma is probably incorrect: 'April 2020'.
Suggestion: April 2020
...I traveled through your airline on 31st April, 2020 on flight bearing number UKV1234 along ...
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Line 6, column 14, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...king you in anticipation. Best regards, Jacob Brown
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, moreover, so, then, therefore, while, as a matter of fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 26.3917525773 140% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1195.0 937.175257732 128% => OK
No of words: 254.0 206.0 123% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70472440945 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68842294947 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 127.690721649 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.562992125984 0.622605031667 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 353.7 290.88556701 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 78.0292380039 44.8134815571 174% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.636363636 76.5299724578 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0909090909 16.8248392259 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 4.34317383033 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175645941189 0.216113520407 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0752306149154 0.0766984524023 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0572466084599 0.0603063233224 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119070026147 0.12726935374 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0357935996605 0.0580467560999 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 8.37731958763 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 70.7449484536 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.28 8.71597938144 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 41.2886597938 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.