Nowadays the crime rate is increasing, especially among teenagers. What are the reasons behind it? How can we reverse this trend?
Has the internet in the contemporary era caused the increasing delinquent behavior among children? As a matter of fact, more often than not it is observed by many a man that the criminal activities among the children are growing rapidly. While the problem stems from the access of teenagers to the violent media available on the internet if the remedial measures such as parental as well as the guidance of the teachers in the school are adopted than the problem could be contained to some extent.
Arguably, in the current state of technology, parents are not equipping the smart devices with parental locks for no reason. Cyberspace is loaded with inappropriate content which is not only easily accessible but also it is free of cost. Owing to the blood and gore in the graphic games and the media, rage, and violence is directly or indirectly promoted among the children due to this. A painstaking research has had been undertaken by Harvard University, that disclosed the fact that a vast 59% increase in the delinquent behavior of the children was seen when the millennials are shown the explicit content on the internet and the television.
Notwithstanding the severity of the problem, it is certainly not without its solutions. While a constant observation of the parents towards the children is the need of the hour, most importantly the task of understanding the problems of the teenagers is required so that they do not hesitate to talk to their parents about the issues they have been facing in the society. for example, no sooner did the parents were able to create a safe environment for their children to discuss their problems, than the juvenile behavior in the adolescents decreased by 65% rather than those who felt neglected in their tender age.
To conclude, it can be asserted that the inability of the parents to supervise their children in their growing age is the root cause of rising violent behavior among the children. However, if the younger generation are provided with proper guidance, it would lead to a socially stable and morally enriching lives; lest good outcomes should be far out of reach.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, well, while, for example, such as, as a matter of fact, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1778.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 359.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95264623955 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35284910392 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75070166778 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554317548747 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 552.6 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.2626822243 49.4020404114 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 148.166666667 106.682146367 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.9166666667 20.7667163134 144% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.83333333333 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0733850736358 0.244688304435 30% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0299190471451 0.084324248473 35% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0286616420845 0.0667982634062 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0467078615887 0.151304729494 31% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0228425264344 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 50.2224549098 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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