You have seen an advertisement in an English newspaper for a job working in the City Museum shop during the holidays. You have decided to apply for the job.
Write a letter to the director of the Museum. In your letter:
– Introduce yourself
– explain what experience and special skills you have
– explain why you are interested in the job
Write at least 150 words.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am Bibhu Kalita writing to you to know about the job opening published in the local newspaper “The Times of India” on last Friday. As the job is for part-time accountant for the City Museum, it attracts me to apply for the post.
I have 2 years of part-time job experience in the same field while I was studying my engineering. I have good knowledge on balance sheet management, which could be beneficial for your organization. Moreover, my excel skill is super good as I have done advance excel certification course last year.
Currently, I do not have any job in my hand and I have all the required skill-set for this job making me an ideal candidate for this post. I am open for all working hours even evening shift.
Kindly consider my candidature for this vacancy and let know the possible date of interview if you consider me a suitable applicant. Thanks in anticipation.
Yours faithfully,
Bibhu kalita
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| 2019-08-23 | sashi555 | 73 | view |
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| 2018-11-29 | NIDHI11 | 81 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 13.0 26.3917525773 49% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 794.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 165.0 206.0 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81212121212 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58402463422 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86036208513 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 127.690721649 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.642424242424 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 251.1 290.88556701 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.8165493849 44.8134815571 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.4 76.5299724578 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5 16.8248392259 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.9 4.34317383033 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2973052884 0.216113520407 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101922785857 0.0766984524023 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0818298444281 0.0603063233224 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165825466121 0.12726935374 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0703213298815 0.0580467560999 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 8.37731958763 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.32 8.71597938144 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.