You have seen an advertisement for a weekend job as a local tour guide showing visitors around your city.
Write a letter of application to the tourism office. In the letter
- Give your reasons for wanting the job
- Explain why you think you can do the job
- Describe any relevant experience you have
Dear Sir,
I am writing in reference to show my keen interest in the position of tour guide as advertised in the local newspaper.
To elucidate there are many reasons for my interest in the job but the most alluring one being that this job is only on weekends and additionally offers a great opportunity to earn some extra bucks. I would like to highlight here that I have right educational credentials which are a Master’s degree in tourism management backed by a rich experience of working as a tour guide with a local tour and travel Company which I believe will enable me to fulfil the role and responsibilities involved in this job.
I have worked with many travel companies in the past as a tour guide and have specialized in organizing visits for large tourists groups around our city additionally I have in-depth knowledge of famous historical tourist spots which will enable me to explain the significance of such monuments to the visitors.
I hope you give due consideration to my application.
Yours sincerely
Ben
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...nce of such monuments to the visitors. I hope you give due consideration to my a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 32.9175257732 58% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 866.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 177.0 206.0 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89265536723 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01152732308 2.54303337028 118% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 127.690721649 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.627118644068 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 283.5 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6804123711 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 16.3608247423 177% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 114.493692209 44.8134815571 255% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 144.333333333 76.5299724578 189% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.5 16.8248392259 175% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.83333333333 4.34317383033 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26017444449 0.216113520407 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113697916313 0.0766984524023 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0225463660702 0.0603063233224 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129159897844 0.12726935374 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.032705307005 0.0580467560999 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 8.37731958763 196% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 70.7449484536 59% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 3.82989690722 292% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 7.45979381443 196% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 8.71597938144 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 7.59969072165 121% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 8.62886597938 220% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 13.6 8.54432989691 159% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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