You live in an English speaking country and you want to do some voluntary, unpaid work in a developing country. Write a letter to a company called Cultural Expeditions, which organizes such trips. In your letter:
Explain why you want to do the voluntary work.
State what your skills and experience are.
Indicate where you would like to volunteer and for how long.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am interested in an overseas opportunity to volunteer with the Cultural Expeditions. I fell passionate about the volunteering cause and it is generally agreed that your company is the leading authority in this matter. Furthermore, I would like to broaden my range of voluntary work because I appreciate being able to contribute to develop childhood education.
I am currently a bilingual children instructor and a motivated professional with a variety of skills and practice on disabled kids. Moreover, I had spent two months in Paraguay in order to improve my professional abilities and experience a voluntary work.
I would like to volunteer me to perform the position of children instructor for one month in Peru's next expedition. Therefore, I am able to contribute to the company as I have experience and no difficulty adapting to the requirements of the voluntary work position.
I look forward to hearing from you soon. Thank you for your time and attention.
Yours faithfully,
Anna Chandler
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, look, moreover, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 877.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 166.0 206.0 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28313253012 4.54256449028 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58944267634 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.22343200063 2.54303337028 127% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 127.690721649 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.632530120482 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 281.7 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.41237113402 120% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.5257395112 44.8134815571 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.7 76.5299724578 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6 16.8248392259 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.1 4.34317383033 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141198608524 0.216113520407 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0561254076807 0.0766984524023 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0404809847463 0.0603063233224 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0848969324814 0.12726935374 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0530994548473 0.0580467560999 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 8.37731958763 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 70.7449484536 66% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 8.71597938144 150% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 7.59969072165 115% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 8.62886597938 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.