You live in an English speaking country and you want to do some voluntary, unpaid work in a developing country. Write a letter to a company called Cultural Expeditions, which organizes such trips. In your letter:
Explain why you want to do the voluntary work.
State what your skills and experience are.
Indicate where you would like to volunteer and for how long.
<span style="font-size: 19.36px;">Dear Sir,
I am writing to express my interest in collaborating with your organization. It indeed is a very noble cause in helping the weaker sections of the society. Your organization, "Cultural Expeditions" is doing an exceptionally commendable job. I would find myself worthy if I get an opportunity to help you as a volunteer.
According to your website, the next project your team will be working on is to educate the underprivileged kids of the slums in Dharavi, India. I am an English graduate and I have always believed in uplifting the society by ensuring that a basic education is provided to every person. I have in past have been part of some small projects with many NGO's where I had the pleasure to pass on my acquired knowledge to others. In my opinion, my degree, experience and strong willingness to volunteer in your next project is a perfect match.
I would consider this gesture as my way to give it back to the society. This increases the chances that someday someone may think just like me and the chain continues. Together, it will be better a society to live in if everyone cares about their surroundings. I also believe that with basic education, the kids will grow as responsible citizens and will engage themselves in skilled activities which can help them stay competitive in today's world.
As a part of corporate social responsibility, my employer allows me leave of 45 days in a year to contribute to such causes. I would wish to redeem all my leaves towards your upcoming project. Kindly let me know the process forward.
Waiting for your positive response.
Thanking you
Yours Faithfully
ABC</span><br>
- You live in an English speaking country and you want to do some voluntary, unpaid work in a developing country. Write a letter to a company called Cultural Expeditions, which organizes such trips. In your letter:Explain why you want to do the voluntary wo 73
- You live in an English speaking country and you want to do some voluntary, unpaid work in a developing country. Write a letter to a company called Cultural Expeditions, which organizes such trips. In your letter:Explain why you want to do the voluntary wo 86
- You live in an English speaking country and you want to do some voluntary, unpaid work in a developing country. Write a letter to a company called Cultural Expeditions, which organizes such trips. In your letter:Explain why you want to do the voluntary wo 78
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 32.9175257732 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 26.3917525773 148% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1433.0 937.175257732 153% => OK
No of words: 282.0 206.0 137% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08156028369 4.54256449028 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 3.78020617076 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.35315706322 2.54303337028 132% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 127.690721649 138% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.624113475177 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 441.9 290.88556701 152% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.13402061856 153% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6804123711 134% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.2786144499 44.8134815571 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.2941176471 76.5299724578 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5882352941 16.8248392259 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.17647058824 4.34317383033 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 7.41237113402 175% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.12129786292 0.216113520407 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0374403960852 0.0766984524023 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0400297813563 0.0603063233224 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0463432419937 0.12726935374 36% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.045410069371 0.0580467560999 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 8.37731958763 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 70.7449484536 78% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 8.71597938144 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 7.59969072165 119% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 41.2886597938 201% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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