Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this to bring into your notice the problems that I am encountering at my current accommodation. My roommate is a first-year commerce student and has ample time to celebrate every day with friends, which makes it difficult for me to study. I hope you will look into it favourably.
Let me explain my situation. My flatmate invites the friends over and they not only drink but also play loud music making it impossible for me to either sleep or study. Although I have requested him and explained to him the importance of final year and efforts which are required to get good grades, there seems to be no change in the situation. In addition to this, my flatmate does not maintain the hygiene which invites mosquitoes which could cause serious illness. There has been a growing concern of dengue on the campus as well.
It would be great if you could shift me with a final year science student as it will create a conducive environment for studies. Also, If the room is in building three it would be great as the building faces a park.
Looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely
Toronto
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 19, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this to bring into your not...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, so, well, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 938.0 937.175257732 100% => OK
No of words: 201.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.66666666667 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56589115723 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 127.690721649 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.641791044776 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 282.6 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.2963440244 44.8134815571 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.1666666667 76.5299724578 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.75 16.8248392259 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.08333333333 4.34317383033 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17229220503 0.216113520407 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0596094103244 0.0766984524023 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0487945214835 0.0603063233224 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112434001696 0.12726935374 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0510886395041 0.0580467560999 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 8.37731958763 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.51 8.71597938144 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.