You live in a room in college which you share with another student. You find it very difficult to work there because he or she always has friend visiting. They have parties in the room and sometimes borrow your things without asking.
Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college for a new room next room. You would prefer a single room. Explain your reasons
Dear Sir/madam,
I am Nisha, studying 1st year B.Com. I am currently staying in our college hostel at Room No:117, which is a double sharing room.
I am writing this letter to explain the difficulties faced by me due to my room mate. She is Lisa, pursuing her 2nd year B.Sc. She creates a lot of trouble by bringing her friends to the room and partying frequently. This is highly disturbing me to prepare for my exams, complete my assignments and record works. Also, she and her friends are using my personal things like soap, towel etc, without my consent, which is affecting my privacy to a great extent.
Hence, I request you to kindly grant me a new room next term. In addition, i also prefer to stay in a single room, where I can work peacefully and maintain my privacy as well. I hope you will understand my concern and do the needful
Yours faithfully
Nisha
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir/madam, I am Nisha, studying 1st year B.Com. I a...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Com
...m, I am Nisha, studying 1st year B.Com. I am currently staying in our college ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...o:117, which is a double sharing room. I am writing this letter to explain the ...
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Line 4, column 3, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...117, which is a double sharing room. I am writing this letter to explain the d...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Sc
...e. She is Lisa, pursuing her 2nd year B.Sc. She creates a lot of trouble by bringi...
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Suggestion:
...ffecting my privacy to a great extent. Hence, I request you to kindly grant me ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, so, well, in addition, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 26.3917525773 61% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 717.0 937.175257732 77% => OK
No of words: 158.0 206.0 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.53797468354 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.54539209256 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53967871075 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 127.690721649 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.670886075949 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 207.0 290.88556701 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.6847330571 44.8134815571 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.6666666667 76.5299724578 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5555555556 16.8248392259 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 4.34317383033 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210097053184 0.216113520407 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0839423469018 0.0766984524023 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0537330443043 0.0603063233224 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13661340874 0.12726935374 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0202437941304 0.0580467560999 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 8.37731958763 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 70.7449484536 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.76 8.71597938144 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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