You need a translation of a document into a different language and you have a friend who speaks that language.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:
- Explain what the document is and why you need a translation
- Explain why this is urgent and important for you
- Ask your friend if and when he/she will be able to help
Dear Long,
Hope you are doing well. I am writing this letter to ask if you could lend me a helping hand in translating a document from English into French.
As you may know, I’m applying for a summer job at a French company. They required a copy of my student identification card and they insist that if it is in another language, they want it to be translated into French because the owner couldn’t read English.
There are already a lot of applications as of now for this position and if I don’t act quickly, I will lose this opportunity. I really want to take this job because my financial situation is not great right now, and you are the only person I know who is fluent in French.
The document is very short with only a few words, so please when you have some free time today or tomorrow, could you do me a favour and set aside maybe 30 minutes and help me? I will come directly to your apartment to get this done if you don’t mind.
Please let me know the time I could come over. Big thanks in advance!
Your friend,
Kevin
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, really, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 852.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 198.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.30303030303 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39551582584 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.636363636364 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 260.1 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.5874052367 44.8134815571 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.2 76.5299724578 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8 16.8248392259 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.5 4.34317383033 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249975031748 0.216113520407 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0962875031934 0.0766984524023 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0666472679845 0.0603063233224 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120265736411 0.12726935374 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0939884863691 0.0580467560999 162% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 8.37731958763 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 70.7449484536 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.66 8.71597938144 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.57 7.59969072165 86% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 41.2886597938 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.