You ordered a book online for exam preparation. It has been sometime you ordered it and you still have not received your book. Write a letter to the e-commerce company about this
• Describe your purchase order of the book
• Explain the importance of the book
• Say what you want the company to do for you.
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to express my dissatisfaction with regards to the book I ordered from your company on 7th of May which has not been delivered.
The book is titled “Human Development” by James Cooper with order number JN9845. I opted for the express delivery option and as a result, paid an additional fee of $15 in other to get the book within five days against the regular delivery option of twenty days. It is already seven days and the book has not been delivered.
The book is essential as it was recommended by scholars who passed their exam at one sitting after studying the book. Furthermore, the book contains 1000 mock questions which will further enhance exam preparation. Also, it contains references for additional study.
While I await for the hard copy, I will suggest an e-copy is sent to my email address registered on your platform. Also, this will ensure I keep up with preparation.
I look forward to a timely response.
Yours faithfully,
John Michael
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- Some people think high school graduates should travel or work for a period of time instead of going directly to study at university Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of both approaches Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples 78
- Write about the following topic Are famous people treated unfairly by the media Should they be given more privacy or is the price of their fame an invasion into their private life Discuss both these views and give your own opinion Give reasons for your an 73
- At the present time the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults compared to the number of adults Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages 84
- You are travelling and need someone to do you a favour while you are gone Write a letter asking a neighbor or friend for a help In your letter include Where you are going What the favour is Why you need this friend for help 89
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, look, may, so, thus, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 32.9175257732 49% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 781.0 937.175257732 83% => OK
No of words: 160.0 206.0 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88125 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55655882008 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72258350423 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.7 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 226.8 290.88556701 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.4433347084 44.8134815571 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.1 76.5299724578 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 16.8248392259 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 4.34317383033 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288587225316 0.216113520407 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0998848306054 0.0766984524023 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0698362600296 0.0603063233224 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131353537913 0.12726935374 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0909230500919 0.0580467560999 157% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 8.37731958763 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 8.71597938144 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 7.59969072165 112% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 8.62886597938 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.