You recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel.Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter-Say where you think you left the papers-Explain why they are so import

Dear Sir,

I am writing this letter to inform you that I have left some extremely important documents in your hotel where I stayed for two days: On Saturday 23rd and Thursday 24th.

I attended an official meeting with our company's client and I left your hotel on the evening of Thursday 24th. When I reached home, I realized that I had left the contract papers signed by our client in my room no.204 where I stayed. As I remember, it would be in the drawer besides the bed.

I have to report the details of my meeting to my boss tomorrow and these signed documents are very important. My career depends on it. If we do not follow this contract, as it is impossible without these papers, our client can sue in Court of Law. You must have understood the value of these papers to me and my company.

I guess the house keeper would have found it during the cleaning and he must have handed it over to the hotel staff. If you already have it, kindly contact me urgently as I have to report to my boss tomorrow morning. I will collect it myself by visiting your hotel.

Looking forward to hearing from you as soon as possible.

Yours faithfully,

James Brown.

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Average: 7.3 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 12, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... 23rd and Thursday 24th. I attended a official meeting with our companys clie...
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Line 7, column 90, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...boss tomorrow and these signed documents are very important. My career depends on...
^^
Line 12, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hearing from you as soon as possible. Yours faithfully, James Brown ...
^^^^
Line 15, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
.... Yours faithfully, James Brown
^^^^^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, look, so, i guess

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 32.9175257732 155% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 968.0 937.175257732 103% => OK
No of words: 216.0 206.0 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.48148148148 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31999420556 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574074074074 0.622605031667 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 288.0 290.88556701 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.83505154639 272% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.3299242287 44.8134815571 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.4615384615 76.5299724578 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6153846154 16.8248392259 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.30769230769 4.34317383033 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275390736119 0.216113520407 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0882248856376 0.0766984524023 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0785382898411 0.0603063233224 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159033692578 0.12726935374 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0685530521794 0.0580467560999 118% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 8.37731958763 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.41 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.77 7.59969072165 89% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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