You recently had a holiday with your friends and you stayed at their house. write a letter to you friend. In your letter:
Thank Your friend for staying with them.
Tell them what you enjoyed most at the holiday
Explain you are sending photos of the holiday with the letter.
Dear Martha,
This was the most exciting holiday I have ever had and I am writing this letter to thank you for inviting me and the arrangements you made for the holiday.
I could have visited the northern areas on my own but that would have been a boring tourist trip. Thanks to your residence in such a heavenly valley of Kashmir. I really loved beautiful house and loving family that gave me a feeling at home especially your younger sister is so cute and very energetic about learning new things. I would never forget the pure love I received during the holiday.
I enjoyed the whole week but the best part of the holiday was the mountaineering. My whole life, I have lived in a concrete city and I have never experienced the thrill of climbing steep mountains. Though I have acrophobia, it was the most amazing experience for me. For instance, the moment when I almost exhausted my energy right on top of the mountain was breathtaking. I had to hang up for full 20 minutes to restore my energy.
I have printed our photos taken with my Ashikaga Camera and I have attached the best photos with this letter. I am sure you will love them. These memories will stay with me forever.
Looking forward to enjoying our next holiday together.
Warm regards,
Yo
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ntaineering. My whole life, I have lived in a concrete city and I have never expe...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ached the best photos with this letter. I am sure you will love them. Warm re...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...re you will love them. Warm regards, Yo
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...will love them. Warm regards, Yo
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, really, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 32.9175257732 134% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 898.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 205.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.38048780488 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36416837134 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 279.9 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.8307310517 44.8134815571 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 59.8666666667 76.5299724578 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.6666666667 16.8248392259 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.26666666667 4.34317383033 29% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 7.41237113402 175% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232154623323 0.216113520407 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0750114058893 0.0766984524023 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0797335857648 0.0603063233224 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159563413217 0.12726935374 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0907376036422 0.0580467560999 156% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.0 8.37731958763 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.53 8.71597938144 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.13 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.