You recently enjoyed a meal at a restaurant to celebrate a special occasion, and you were very pleased with the food and service.Write a letter to the restaurant manager. In your letter:•give details of your visit to the restaurant•mention the reason

Essay topics:

You recently enjoyed a meal at a restaurant to celebrate a special occasion, and you were very pleased with the food and service.

Write a letter to the restaurant manager. In your letter:

• give details of your visit to the restaurant

• mention the reason for the celebration

• say what was good about the food and the service

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to you to express my delight with the excellent service and high quality of food that your restaurant provided us last Sunday, on the occasion of my 30th birthday.

We were a party of fifteen, which include my family, close friends and colleagues from work. Your staff went out of their way to provide seating arrangements that were easily accessible and did not interfere with other diners. I find that this is unusual in many restaurants these days. The waiters were extremely professional and polite and were obviously experienced as they did not encroach too much on the proceeding.

Your current menu offers a great deal of choice, as does your wine list, and everything was available. We were very satisfied with the quality or quantity of the dishes served, and the presentation of each dish was akin to the dishes produced in shows such as 'Master Chef'.

I ordered the rack or mutton ribs, which was deliciously succulent and, if anything, maybe slightly too large. Nevertheless, we managed to finish it. I was similarly impressed with the large variety of local and International wines available. The wine that was ordered arrived at the correct temperature that each wine should be consumed. The waiters were familiar with the etiquette, and the service was paramount.

All-in-all, our group enjoyed a delicious meal at your establishment, and I had a very happy birthday.

Congratulations once again.

Yours faithfully,

Denis Brian

Votes
Average: 8.7 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, nevertheless, similarly, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.48453608247 187% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 5.05154639175 277% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1271.0 937.175257732 136% => OK
No of words: 245.0 206.0 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18775510204 4.54256449028 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8585594156 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 127.690721649 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.636734693878 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 380.7 290.88556701 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.463917525773 862% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.8769547741 44.8134815571 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.7333333333 76.5299724578 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3333333333 16.8248392259 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.73333333333 4.34317383033 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207027791371 0.216113520407 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0583892205773 0.0766984524023 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0483969588041 0.0603063233224 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0928798500989 0.12726935374 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0586336500912 0.0580467560999 101% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 8.37731958763 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 70.7449484536 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 8.71597938144 144% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 7.59969072165 116% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 41.2886597938 165% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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