You recently met a couple who will be visiting your town.Write a letter to them and say
· What to bring
· recommend where they should stay
· what places they should visit
Dear John and Merry,
I am pleased to know that both you are comming to Chandigarh next week. I would like to recommend
some basic things which need to bring and few places to visit in my city during your vacations.
As you know India has diverse climatic conditions. From December to January, temprature will be quite
low in the northern parts as compare to your southern parts. It would be more convenient if you bring
some warm clothes such as winter jackets. To tell you more ,although there are many renowned hotels
throughout the city,James Villa will be the perfect location for your accommodation. For personal
confirmation,you can also chcek the hotel's website for tourists reviews regarding the facilties and
services offered by the hotel.
Form the past few decades, Chandigarh has been one of the most attractive cities owing to its wonderful
architecture. There are many historical buildings and monuments to visit where you can explore about
native's culture and their habits.Besides these, I would like to suggest you that the Rock Garden and
Shukhna Lake will definitely make your trip more enjoyable and memorable.Do not forgot to capture your
beautiful memories of these places into a digital library.
I hope you both will enjoy your stay and excursion at my place and looking forward to meeting you soon.
Yours truly,
Somnath
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 97, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...visit in my city during your vacations. As you know India has diverse climatic con...
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Line 6, column 59, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...such as winter jackets. To tell you more ,although there are many renowned hotels ...
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Line 7, column 20, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , James
...any renowned hotels throughout the city,James Villa will be the perfect location for ...
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Line 8, column 13, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , you
...ccommodation. For personal confirmation,you can also chcek the hotels website for t...
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Line 8, column 37, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'hotels'' or 'hotel's'?
Suggestion: hotels'; hotel's
...al confirmation,you can also chcek the hotels website for tourists reviews regarding ...
^^^^^^
Line 12, column 34, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Besides
...about natives culture and their habits.Besides these, I would like to suggest you that...
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Line 13, column 74, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Do
... your trip more enjoyable and memorable.Do not forgot to capture your beautiful m...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, if, look, regarding, so, such as, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 4.92783505155 203% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1149.0 937.175257732 123% => OK
No of words: 224.0 206.0 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12946428571 4.54256449028 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69503496981 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 127.690721649 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.660714285714 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 349.2 290.88556701 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 80.956778592 44.8134815571 181% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.454545455 76.5299724578 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3636363636 16.8248392259 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.18181818182 4.34317383033 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 15.0 4.29896907216 349% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20322994599 0.216113520407 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0728863689697 0.0766984524023 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.048337490207 0.0603063233224 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0592277755703 0.12726935374 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0473633358155 0.0580467560999 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 8.37731958763 154% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 70.7449484536 72% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 7.45979381443 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 8.71597938144 143% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 7.59969072165 117% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 41.2886597938 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 8.15463917526 159% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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