Respected Sir/Madam,
I am max, recently I have ordered "Sony speakers" but unfortunately I received a "Boat speakers" which are wireless can you please exchange for my future inconvenience about.
As I have informed you above that I have ordered the "Bluetooth" and the Brand name is "Sony". it consists of Hand-Free phone calls and it is used for laptops and Smartphones such that Android, iPhone, iPad, iPod, BlackBerry.
Actually, I have order for my "online classes" which is a great help with its features. The reason behind is this it only supports my laptop. because my laptop accepts only wire connections.
I think that you have understood my availability and capability. what concerns me so much. I wish you could kindly replace the item as soon as possible. because the coming next week my classes are going to start and it is a kind request that makes an early arrangement.
Thanking you Sir/Madam,
Yours Faithfully,
max.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Respected Sir/Madam, I am max, recently I have ordered '...
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Line 3, column 41, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'maxed'.
Suggestion: maxed
... I am max, recently I have ordered 'Sony spe...
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Line 3, column 125, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...kers' but unfortunately I received a 'Boat speakers' which are wir...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e for my future inconvenience about. As I have informed you above that I have...
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Line 5, column 150, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...and the Brand name is 'Sony'. it consists of Hand-Free phone calls and i...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...oid, iPhone, iPad, iPod, BlackBerry. Actually, I have order for my 'onli...
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Line 7, column 185, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Because
...ind is this it only supports my laptop. because my laptop accepts only wire connections...
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Line 7, column 185, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ind is this it only supports my laptop. because my laptop accepts only wire connections...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...aptop accepts only wire connections. I think that you have understood my avai...
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Line 9, column 96, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: What
...erstood my availability and capability. what concerns me so much. I wish you could k...
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Line 9, column 184, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Because
...y replace the item as soon as possible. because the coming next week my classes are goi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, so, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 26.3917525773 23% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 849.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 157.0 206.0 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.4076433121 4.54256449028 119% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53976893118 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.51774622746 2.54303337028 138% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 127.690721649 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.675159235669 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 261.0 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.41237113402 120% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.230548796 44.8134815571 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.1818181818 76.5299724578 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.2727272727 16.8248392259 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.36363636364 4.34317383033 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 2.54639175258 432% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.116639328397 0.216113520407 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0490780690767 0.0766984524023 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0337902276948 0.0603063233224 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0558164977197 0.12726935374 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0259819149877 0.0580467560999 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 8.37731958763 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 70.7449484536 69% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.51 8.71597938144 155% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 7.59969072165 118% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.