Countries around the world will be facing significant challenges relating not only to the environment, but population and education as well.
What problems will your country face in the next ten years?
How can these problems be overcome?
In our hectic world, several problems have come up so that governments would face catastrophic destiny if they did not take action to solve them. According to statistics, the growth of population is sharply rising in some countries as same as my country, Iran. This phenomenon will lead to some difficulties in various parts of society includes environment, health care and education. These essay will discus these problems and suggest some solution to overwhelm on them.
As I mentioned above, the population of Iran has been sharply increasing for several recent years. This excessive growth is engendering difficulties in some aspects of community that education is the most important of them. By increasing the number of applicants as a result of increasing in population, academic training will comes up a huge cost so that make it a unique which belongs to rich class of society. In addition, due to shortage in job, white collar job will be allot to people with superb background.In consequence, a widening gap between rich and poor classes of society will be broadened more and more day in, day out.
But I believe that it is a right time to wake up from our slumber and work hard on this situation to make better tomorrow. One of the social obligation that government have is to acquaint community about the method of contraception and the benefits they can reap from it. Moreover, I would dare to say that governments should uphold their benevolent nature and place more important on benefits of society than gathering treasures for themselves. They have to be conscientious about society and more fund should be allocated on prepare better situation in slum areas of countries to dull widening gap. The last but not least, if they resist against corruption and partisanship, people's spirit of competition will be interceded so that they make more efforts to achieve their dream job based on their merit.
In a nutshell, over growth population is one the main reasons of some current and also forthcoming difficulties. Fortunately, all of these bothers could be solved by a cooperation between governments and societies. This essay discussed a portion of these problems and some possible solutions for them.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...d some possible solutions for them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, in addition, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 63.0 41.998997996 150% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1858.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 367.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06267029973 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37689890912 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90378851923 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.547683923706 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 580.5 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.138821607 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.125 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9375 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.3125 7.06120827912 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198041554896 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0600528282631 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0447866564651 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120030876209 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0399881745336 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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