You recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or try to get a job. You think he/she should get a job.
Write a letter to this friend. In your letter:
• Say why he/she would not enjoy going to college.
• Explain why getting a job is a good idea for him/her.
• Suggest types of job that would be suitable for him/her
Dear Habeeb,
I hope this letter finds you in good health. I understand that you want my opinion regarding pursuing college or carrier. After due consideration, I feel that you should get a job that you would feel comfortable in.
Since you have completed M.B.A specializing in HR, any other program that you take up would not complement it. Moreover, you are a practical and systematic person who can work comfortably with any person.
Feather more, there are many companies that are recruiting people with your specialization from your college, I would urge you to apply to a few companies. This is the perfect example of the expression that “practice makes the man perfect”. Not only will this experience will help reduce your fear of interview but also help you crack your dream job.
Finally, an organization will help you gain experiences which you would carryon for rest of your life. I hope you would consider my views while taking your deciding. Thank you for asking my suggestions.
Yours Friendly,
Dwarakesh Suresh
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 218, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...job that you would feel comfortable in. Since you have completed M.B.A specializing i...
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Line 3, column 30, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: A
...able in. Since you have completed M.B.A specializing in HR, any other program t...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...o can work comfortably with any person. Feather more, there are many companies t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, moreover, regarding, so, while, i feel
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 4.92783505155 203% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 26.3917525773 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 871.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 172.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06395348837 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79608854315 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.686046511628 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 254.7 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.8083661417 44.8134815571 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.5833333333 76.5299724578 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.3333333333 16.8248392259 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.16666666667 4.34317383033 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251249783884 0.216113520407 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0940834719384 0.0766984524023 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.045887889521 0.0603063233224 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155725893156 0.12726935374 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0635489011898 0.0580467560999 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 8.37731958763 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.48 8.71597938144 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.