You recently stayed in a hotel in a large city The weather was very unusual for the time of year and the heating cooling system in the hotel was quite inadequate Write a letter to the manager of the hotel In your letter give details of what went wrong exp

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You recently stayed in a hotel in a large city. The weather was very unusual for the time of year and the heating / cooling system in the hotel was quite inadequate.

Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter:

give details of what went wrong

explain what you had to do to overcome the problem at the time

say what action you would like the manager to take

Dear Manager,
I am writing this letter with a heavy dissatisfaction with the heating/cooling service of room 405.
Yesterday at 10 am, I checked in the above-mentioned room number. As there was severe humid weather, I turned on the air conditioner to cool the place. It took nearly 2 hours to reduce the temperature But that night I had the opposite experience. I tried switching it to heating but the heater does not function properly.
Undoubtedly, your service was good but the heating and, also the cooling system gave me the problem.
Due to this issue, I could not concentrate on my work and faced a lot of trouble. I had to call the room service to check up on the system and requested him to change my room. The staff was generous as he quickly changed the room and helped me shift.
I hope you fix the problem as soon as possible as I am planning to come next week and would like to have the same room or any other room on the other floor.

Yours sincerely,
XYZ

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 804.0 937.175257732 86% => OK
No of words: 180.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.46666666667 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73028285063 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 127.690721649 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.633333333333 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 244.8 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.5681081876 44.8134815571 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.0909090909 76.5299724578 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3636363636 16.8248392259 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.54545454545 4.34317383033 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130194014124 0.216113520407 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0495200750054 0.0766984524023 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.050362295233 0.0603063233224 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0780691832805 0.12726935374 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0493518308384 0.0580467560999 85% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 8.37731958763 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.35 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.41 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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