some people think that developed countries have a higher responsibility to combat climate change than developing countries. others believe that all countries should have the same responsibilities towards protecting the environment/
Having attention to climate change is now one of the controversial issues that people like debating about. Some people say that developed countries have a higher responsibility for this matter, other says developing countries should have a charge of this matter as well. In this essay, I will address both view and give my own opinion.
It is undeniable that advanced countries can make a big change because they have power and a strong financial state. So, some people believe that developed countries should lead others to battle this issue. For example, some developed countries such as the USA, France and Germany made the agreement to reduce carbon emission. Then, other countries such as South Korea and Japan followed them to take part in the same policy. It shows how major countries impact on others. In another case, some rich countries such as Canada and the united states have given their garbage and thousands of money to poor countries. Many people claim that it is not a fair transaction and rich countries should have more responsibility for the environment.
My support goes to the idea that all countries are responsible for the earth. Climate change is not only limited particular regions. Every element of earth is circulated. For illustrates, radioactivity exposure occurred in Japan several years ago. As a result, some countries which are located next to Japan are still suffering radioactivity pollution because pollution keeps flow by water. Second of all, two heads are better than one. To make the best solution, all nation should join hand together. No more earth is a private matter.
In conclusion, many people argue whether only developed countries have a higher responsibility to battle climate change than developing countries. In my opinion, I strongly believe that every country goes forward together for our shared future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
second, so, still, then, well, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1566.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18543046358 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71346251515 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569536423841 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 495.0 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.4052079802 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.3 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.7 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.514420486412 0.244688304435 210% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.136384305977 0.084324248473 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.129942269089 0.0667982634062 195% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.330949091682 0.151304729494 219% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10134141127 0.056905535591 178% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.23 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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