You recently went to a concert and thought one of the singers was very good. You went to tell him how you feel
Write a letter to your singer. In your letter
Say how you feel about his performance
Give details of your musical activities
Explain how you would like him to help you with your musical activities
Dear Mr Jack chow：
I am writing a letter to thank you for your awesome performance in the National stadium last Friday. I am a Chinese music fan of you, and I brought your music album when you released new song. There was over 100 CDs of you in my study room, and your poster was hanged in bedroom as well. For sure, I won’t miss you concert.
The concert you performed last Friday was excellent because I think you’ve singing from your heart. It was go climax when you sing the old song ‘the moon box’and the audience in the concert were singing with you together.
When I were at school, I was learned to sing your pop music but I found it was quite difficult that your rhythm was quite fast. I even couldn’t catch your words. Though I can sing most songs of you by practise but still cannot sing the difficult ones smoothly like the most classic one‘the moon box’ . Could you tell me some tricks to sing this one well.
Thank you again for your excellent performance and hope to hear from you soon.
Your sincerely
Elliot
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 113, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'gone'.
Suggestion: gone
...apos;ve singing from your heart. It was go climax when you sing the old song &apos...
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Line 7, column 315, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...most classic one'the moon box' . Could you tell me some tricks to sing t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, still, well, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 883.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 192.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.59895833333 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41989436726 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.609375 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 251.1 290.88556701 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.8319386088 44.8134815571 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.5833333333 76.5299724578 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 16.8248392259 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.75 4.34317383033 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.378639310727 0.216113520407 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.173377291102 0.0766984524023 226% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0667510273604 0.0603063233224 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.218051997734 0.12726935374 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.119967801473 0.0580467560999 207% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 8.37731958763 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.1 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.06 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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