Writing task 2
Many people work long hours, leaving very little time for leisure activities
Does this situation have more advantages or more disadvantages?
Working over time become a common phenomenon these days in our society especially in our mega cities. And it seems to be an increasingly widespread concern that overwork is stealing our leisure time and activities. I think the keen competition and modern working pattern are responsible for this.
In the past, it was not common for the people to working overtime, due to the booming population and globalisation, people have to compete not only the fresh graduates from universities but also the with the qualified job applicants from overseas. Work more to obtain a decent job is the key of success in workplace. It is true that it will bring the benefit for companies and organisations to choose the best employees all over the world and boost the productivity, therefore, it will achieve the fast growth of GDP of our society.
It is also true that there are many famous companies have the culture of long working hours. For example, In a TV interview of the CEO of Alibaba Jack Ma, he was admitted that the one of reasons of the success of Alibaba was the long working hours culture in this company, and it is also true for some other international giants like HUAWEI and Tencent.
Of course. This issue is bring some negative effects to the employees for it steal lots of their leisure time to relax or company with their families. Over time work may result both physical and emotion problems. The staff who always working overtime may have little time to go gym or do exercise, and might not be able to talk and play with their kids. They lose their health and happiness.
Although it is deem that the long working hours may bring the high productivity of company and better indicator of GDP. But only the work and life balance could make this growth more sustainable.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 26, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'brought'.
Suggestion: brought
...and Tencent. Of course. This issue is bring some negative effects to the employees ...
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Line 9, column 16, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'deemed'.
Suggestion: deemed
... health and happiness. Although it is deem that the long working hours may bring t...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, therefore, for example, i think, of course, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1472.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71794871795 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58815640624 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.528846153846 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 460.8 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.8621823605 49.4020404114 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.142857143 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2857142857 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.57142857143 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255635761916 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.081035223596 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0466903340577 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133786290479 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00802342650365 0.056905535591 14% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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