Today, more and more news come along with image in varieties of news media, such like TV, newspapers and Internet news are more likely to use pictures along with the body news, and some entertainment news are represent to us with some image only. People argue that the picture is better than the word in some ways. Basically, I agree with this point view, whereas the words in the news are also important.
The advantage of pictures in the news stories is obvious. Firstly Readers can get more information than the plain news. A scientist carry out such experiment shows reader can get double of the information than the words only news. Secondly, the image in the news can be more vivid that can attract our children to read more news and get more knowledge from it.
Although pictures in news have massive of advantages. The word content is also dispensable in the news stories. We can not get the details about the news if a news have little words, also some pictures in news carry some information not so accuracy will cause reader misunderstanding.
In conclusion, although embody the image in the news stories are the main trend of today’s media and indeed improve the efficiency of reading. We also have to notice and pay attention of the accuracy of the news which can carry the wrong information and cause the misunderstanding to our readers.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 210, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'represented'.
Suggestion: represented
...y news, and some entertainment news are represent to us with some image only. People argu...
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Line 2, column 361, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...re news and get more knowledge from it. Although pictures in news have massive of advant...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, whereas, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1126.0 1615.20841683 70% => OK
No of words: 236.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77118644068 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63749999149 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 176.041082164 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.483050847458 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 356.4 506.74238477 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.2972270029 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.8333333333 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6666666667 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.83333333333 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272131788425 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116052496692 0.084324248473 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0621103061499 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169231642927 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0701563133569 0.056905535591 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.46 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 78.4519038076 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.