You rent an apartment and recently a new neighbour has moved in who lives above you. They are making a lot of noise and this is disturbing you.Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter:Explain what the problem isExplain why it is disturbing you so m

Essay topics:

You rent an apartment and recently a new neighbour has moved in who lives above you. They are making a lot of noise and this is disturbing you.
Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter:
Explain what the problem is
Explain why it is disturbing you so much
Tell your landlord what you would like him/her to do about i

Dear Ms Smith,

I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with the noise that has been made by my new neighbor.
I really enjoyed you and your apartment. However, after a period of time I have experienced a number of problems. There are a lot of fuss during all day such as loud radio sound and many kinds of domestic appliances turned on at the same time. Moreover, since Thursdays until Saturdays there are always some parties late at night.
Therefore, I am very disappointed with this situation. The condominium policies have not been accomplished. It is not acceptable that there is no period of silent and peace here, since I work at home and I need a peaceful place to make calls and stay concentrate.
I would be grateful if you send a written complaint letter to the administration center because you are the owner of the property and they request it.
I would appreciate your time and attention to this matter. Thank you for your kindness and consideration.

Yours sincerely,
Anna Chandler

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 58, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...ou and your apartment. However, after a period of time I have experienced a number of problems...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, really, so, therefore, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 839.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 174.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82183908046 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9255131679 2.54303337028 115% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.683908045977 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 261.9 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.053785006 44.8134815571 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.9166666667 76.5299724578 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5 16.8248392259 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.41666666667 4.34317383033 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222161380792 0.216113520407 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0775081214809 0.0766984524023 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0878818423554 0.0603063233224 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114852839691 0.12726935374 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0817767991373 0.0580467560999 141% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 8.37731958763 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.08 8.71597938144 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.42 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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