You share a parking area with several neighbour and have started having problems. Write a letter to be copied to all neighbour that shares the parking area explaining the problem suggesting ways to help the situation proposing a
possible meeting. Write for 150 words.
Dear Residents of Ramaniyum Sanjivini
The objective of this letter bring cars parked in locations not allocated to them thereby creating inconvient for allocated car owners.This is not an isolated incident in our Appartment.
This insident has happened dispite a circular being circulated to all the residents last week.I have 3 photographs proving my point and also that I fell down in the dump when i need to find different parking place for my
car.
I would request a solution for this issue as it can end parking violation in a peaceful way. It would be helpful if we could meet
with an objective to find a solution for this issue. One such contribute from my side is that a dedicate parking for visitors and its responsibility being taken up by respective resident.
Awaiting solution which can be implemented or discussed in order to prevent mis-understanding and clash between us. Thanking You
Yours Respectfully
Dwarakesh Suresh
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Residents of Ramaniyum Sanjivini The objective of this letter bring cars ...
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Line 3, column 137, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: This
...ing inconvient for allocated car owners.This is not an isolated incident in our Appa...
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Line 5, column 96, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...rculated to all the residents last week.I have 3 photographs proving my point and...
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Line 5, column 177, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... also that I fell down in the dump when i need to find different parking place fo...
^
Line 5, column 222, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d to find different parking place for my car. I would request a solution for ...
^^^
Line 8, column 76, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a peaceful way" with adverb for "peaceful"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...s issue as it can end parking violation in a peaceful way. It would be helpful if we could meet ...
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Line 8, column 131, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ay. It would be helpful if we could meet with an objective to find a solution for...
^^^
Line 9, column 95, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...ne such contribute from my side is that a dedicate parking for visitors and its responsibi...
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Line 14, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... Yours Respectfully Dwarakesh Suresh
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 809.0 937.175257732 86% => OK
No of words: 156.0 206.0 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1858974359 4.54256449028 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53411884305 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03819105147 2.54303337028 119% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 127.690721649 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.711538461538 0.622605031667 114% => OK
syllable_count: 245.7 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.6636570147 44.8134815571 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.571428571 76.5299724578 151% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2857142857 16.8248392259 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.42857142857 4.34317383033 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 2.54639175258 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164027266454 0.216113520407 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0724024785127 0.0766984524023 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0336882109262 0.0603063233224 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0736273757675 0.12726935374 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0449786695697 0.0580467560999 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 8.37731958763 170% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 70.7449484536 69% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 7.45979381443 160% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 8.71597938144 151% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 7.59969072165 118% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 8.15463917526 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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