Do you agree or disagree with the following statement. "It is better
to be a follower than a leader".
Leader is always inspired by their action and his admirer promptly be
as a follower, despite it seems to be an two different angle or portions.
I think there must be equal honesty bond between them. That leading chief
would mainly be prominently efficient person in anycase he might be save
the situation as one who even creates a way by working together with the
follower. Though enough in possible or impossible thing followers are
only the work completer that is assigned by his lead and there is no
choice, none other to finish the job. so if in that situation as per my
concern, I am totally disagree to the illustrated point of statement and
that is justified with two reasonable paragraph in accordance with
personal experience to support my own view in this essay.
Firstly to start of with my part that everyone’s nature for given
sentence quite places lot variable opinion when it gives to two people.
In that form I am denying the statement lines apart from being follower
for some one, its best to be a leader that helps in discovering us and
able to learn effective lessons from our management. As for me lead taker
is not the boss or only the work permitter for follower to treat them as
servant. so as when handling trendsetter role the person has to be well
organise the condition that has to adhere and followed by the assisted in
that case if the fall in a pit, is not the duty of other admirer go with
the same. But if they are doing then its for sure provide with wrong
result absolutely blame will be the head of the follower. For Instance,
one for my personal experience holds a bad memory in my college days, on
the whole class is represented by a representative as equal to class
leader on the accont of it she has our class incharge support inspite of
a fact that there is a mistake in method of doing thing in current
circumstance because she changed everything for sake alone for her
benefit, although whole class against her and filed complaint to our
class staff, the teacher stressed us follow her, not a problem for
representing a whole unity of a class u have to go with her part of rule.
in the end of it blame carried over by the individual student who
objected her that were not pretty fair enough and situations where
problematic over there.
Most of all leader is good role and everyone has to be good and play role
as of in best form. Need more attentive person in the society and
environment present way to improve our work based on it take
responsiblity for each and every follower and human beings too. New trend
maker should be right clear enough with required knowledge and positive
attitude. credit of the fault rate must take up by the lead taker and
success rate given to the follower though it is not goiing to be an
easier part. But its going to be a more satisfied form in my heart while
leading with great personality.
Finally I conclude that in mostly disagree the statement by stressing it
enough with my relevant reasons and experience that facilitate my nature
of strong opinion would be my feasible state.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 39, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
... as a follower, despite it seems to be an two different angle or portions. I thi...
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Line 8, column 39, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
... choice, none other to finish the job. so if in that situation as per my concern...
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Line 9, column 23, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'disagreed'.
Suggestion: disagreed
...uation as per my concern, I am totally disagree to the illustrated point of statement a...
^^^^^^^^
Line 10, column 39, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'paragraph' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'paragraphs'.
Suggestion: paragraphs
... that is justified with two reasonable paragraph in accordance with personal experience...
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Line 14, column 16, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...it gives to two people. In that form I am denying the statement lines apart from being fo...
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Line 15, column 5, Rule ID: ANY_BODY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'someone'?
Suggestion: someone
...nt lines apart from being follower for some one, its best to be a leader that helps in ...
^^^^^^^^
Line 18, column 10, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
...for follower to treat them as servant. so as when handling trendsetter role the p...
^^
Line 31, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: In
...ss u have to go with her part of rule. in the end of it blame carried over by the...
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Line 39, column 11, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Credit
...uired knowledge and positive attitude. credit of the fault rate must take up by the l...
^^^^^^
Line 41, column 18, Rule ID: IT_IS[19]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...s not goiing to be an easier part. But its going to be a more satisfied form in my...
^^^
Line 43, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Finally,
...while leading with great personality. Finally I conclude that in mostly disagree the ...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, if, so, then, well, while, apart from, as for, as to, for instance, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 15.1003584229 179% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.0286738351 163% => OK
Pronoun: 58.0 43.0788530466 135% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 80.0 52.1666666667 153% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2593.0 1977.66487455 131% => OK
No of words: 556.0 407.700716846 136% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66366906475 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.85588840946 4.48103885553 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52433615925 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 281.0 212.727598566 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.505395683453 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 809.1 618.680645161 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 30.0 20.1344086022 149% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 109.824228252 48.9658058833 224% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 144.055555556 100.406767564 143% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.8888888889 20.6045352989 150% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.83333333333 5.45110844103 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 45.0 4.53405017921 992% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26722719174 0.236089414692 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0873395232628 0.076458572812 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0386636476006 0.0737576698707 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0573418421107 0.150856017488 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0537015073457 0.0645574589148 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 11.7677419355 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.1575268817 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.34 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 86.8835125448 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.0537634409 139% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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