EXTREME OR ADVENTURE SPORTS.DISCUSS ITS ADVANTAGES AND DISADVANTAGES
By my perspective this topic to be discussed,this essay will analyze the both the aspects in detail with relevant example and reasons before arriving to the conclution . EXTREME OR ADVENTURES SPORTS,GIVES A THRILL EXPERIENCE IN OUR LIFE. we find disadvantages also to be considered
firstly,adventures sports or extreme sports gives an experience and thrills to our lives.extreme sports defines a confidants after attempting,eventually very few members try to approach these types of sports.people who are regular to these types of adventure sports feels the relaxation into their mind,soul and increases their confidants.who are regular they assume fresh,stress relief after participation.many adventure sports unleeses a motivation such sports are sky diving,scuba diving,zip line ect,furthermore sports like sky diving has placed an record of diving 25 miles above the earth known as 25000 meters
duration of 15 minutes.
disadvantages also to be considered thrilling sports has made many life injuries due to the natures defects and equipment of the particular events defects,very few people have lost their lives due to some
tragidic adventures places and associative.many adventures schools where not trained and guided properly,due to the authority problems.many schools aims for money and clients to participate not about the lessons they learn and techniques strict rule should be followed by the government to adventure schools about their license and updated equipment of the sport.consequently,every month government authority have to visit the sporting school.
in the end,public should try once in their lifetime of adventure sports to feel their relaxation in mind and soul.government authorities have to visit the sporting schools to check their surroundings for
the betterment of the public
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 31.9359605911 125% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 5.75862068966 243% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1580.0 1207.87684729 131% => OK
No of words: 268.0 242.827586207 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.89552238806 5.00649968141 118% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.6447155307 2.71678728327 134% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 139.433497537 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589552238806 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 472.5 379.143842365 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 12.6551724138 40% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 53.0 20.5024630542 259% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 259.554695585 50.4703680194 514% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 316.0 104.977214359 301% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 53.6 20.9669160288 256% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.25397266985 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.12807881773 170% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 24.0 5.33497536946 450% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258269719745 0.242375264174 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.13352145961 0.0925447433944 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0831846892071 0.071462118173 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0945739400685 0.151781067708 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0750674906694 0.0609392437508 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 33.2 12.6369458128 263% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 0.76 53.1260098522 1% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 6.54236453202 243% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 26.3 10.9458128079 240% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 17.83 11.5310837438 155% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.04 8.32886699507 133% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 55.0591133005 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.94827586207 201% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 23.2 10.3980295567 223% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 20.0 10.5123152709 190% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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