You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
Although you have never formally studied computing, you have always been interested in computers. You have just read about a computer course that really interests you, but it is only for people who have completed an elementary course.
Write a letter to the college enrolment officer. In your letter
explain why you are writing
describe your circumstances
ask if a special exception can be made for you so you can enrol in the course
You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows:
Dear
You should write at least 150 words.
Dear Officer,
I am writing this letter to let you know that I am completely interested to start a computer course as this tools is really important for all careers and the world have been changed with the technology and I need to improve my skills on computer to get a better position in my job.
When I was 12 years old I used to play games and make some graphics on excel that need helped me to grow in my Engineer career but the company that I am working are requiring knowledge in the news software as Autocad, Inventor and others. Furthermore, it is important to know hot to use this tools for the future.
Although, my knowledge of computes is intermediate level I need to achieve the advanced level and I would like to ask you if it is possible to open a special exception for me because I do not have the elementary course and I have checked on the website that is requested by the course to start this specific course.
I would appreciate if you give me this chance. However, I would pay extra fee if required and I will share the course for all my friends who is interested to learn more about computers.
Yours sincerely,
Igor Falcao
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, really, so, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 951.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 214.0 206.0 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.44392523364 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56635667173 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570093457944 0.622605031667 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 305.1 290.88556701 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 16.3608247423 183% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 111.235180164 44.8134815571 248% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 135.857142857 76.5299724578 178% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.5714285714 16.8248392259 182% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.28571428571 4.34317383033 168% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.299518340742 0.216113520407 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118302831942 0.0766984524023 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106882991336 0.0603063233224 177% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182546295751 0.12726935374 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103955628815 0.0580467560999 179% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 8.37731958763 177% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.95 70.7449484536 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 7.45979381443 169% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.06 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 27.0 8.62886597938 313% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 14.0 8.54432989691 164% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.