you successfuly passed a job interview.you were told to strart your work on july 10th but unfurtunatley you can not attend your workplace on that day.write a letter to your new employer . in your letter:
express your appriciation for the interview
explain your situation
suggest a solution.
Dear Mr Smith,
I would like to appreciate you because of the interview day that you accepted me for the position of a supervisor in your institute.I always wanted to have this job.I am writing concerning this position that I am due to begin on 10th july.but,there is a problem.
As I say in my interview,I lived in another city and it is far from there.Though,I can find an apartment in that city and it is near my new workplace,unfortunately,the previous tenant has not left the house yet,so I can not move in to my new apartment up to ten more days.
I realise this will be unacceptable for you, but I hope, given the circumstances, you will let me to work on this position two weeks later than planned.I can promise working hard to make up these delays and preparing all the documentaries you need at the end of the month.
I would like to emphasise that I need his job and I am very keen on working with you to get more practical experiences.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
simin jalali
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 133, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...ition of a supervisor in your institute.I always wanted to have this job.I am wri...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...titute.I always wanted to have this job.I am writing concerning this position tha...
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Line 2, column 243, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , there
... that I am due to begin on 10th july.but,there is a problem. As I say in my interview...
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Line 3, column 25, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , I
... is a problem. As I say in my interview,I lived in another city and it is far fro...
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Line 3, column 74, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Though
...n another city and it is far from there.Though,I can find an apartment in that city an...
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Line 3, column 80, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , I
...her city and it is far from there.Though,I can find an apartment in that city and ...
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Line 3, column 149, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , unfortunately
...hat city and it is near my new workplace,unfortunately,the previous tenant has not left the ho...
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Line 3, column 210, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , so
...evious tenant has not left the house yet,so I can not move in to my new apartment u...
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Line 4, column 152, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...s position two weeks later than planned.I can promise working hard to make up the...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ries you need at the end of the month. I would like to emphasise that I need his...
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Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...you to get more practical experiences. I look forward to hearing from you. Your...
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Line 8, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rom you. Yours sincerely, simin jalali
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 32.9175257732 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 839.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 187.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.48663101604 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.23658877177 2.54303337028 127% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 127.690721649 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.620320855615 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 265.5 290.88556701 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6804123711 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 16.3608247423 189% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 110.200826776 44.8134815571 246% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 139.833333333 76.5299724578 183% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.1666666667 16.8248392259 185% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.16666666667 4.34317383033 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 2.54639175258 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265175996836 0.216113520407 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128486565089 0.0766984524023 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.05630703119 0.0603063233224 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116675844531 0.12726935374 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0549446659574 0.0580467560999 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 8.37731958763 183% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.93 70.7449484536 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 7.45979381443 174% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.35 8.71597938144 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 28.5 8.62886597938 330% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 14.4 8.54432989691 169% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.