You work for an international company, and would like to spend six months working in its head office in another country.
Write a letter to your manager. In your letter:
• explain why you want to work in the company’s head office for six months
• say how your work could be done while you are away
• ask for his/her help in arranging it
Write at least 150 words.
Dear Mr Jay,
I am writing this letter to express my interest in working at our company headquarters in Cedar Rapids for six months. It was recently brought to my notice that there is six months opening in the office for engineering staff. This opportunity would help me further enhancing my skills so that I can perform better and contribute more to the company.
As you know, I have been recently promoted to the lead engineer of the team. This position demands me to take key decisions on the design of our products. In my opinion, it would be very beneficial if I could spend some time with design engineers at the headquarters in understanding our products in more detail.
Coming to the work during my absence from India, I have already planned six months of tasks for the team. I can easily check up on the progress from Cedar Rapids. Also, Priya can be appointed as the temporary lead in my absence. She is well versed with projects and can handle day-to-day troubleshoots. I will also be available in the early mornings and evenings, in case, some task needs my intervention.
Finally, I would like to request you to provide your approval for the same. I will send you my detailed report on the same by today evening.
Yours sincerely,
Madhulika Banerji
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 126, Rule ID: TODAY_MORNING[1]
Message: This is a non-standard collocation. Normally, 'this evening' is used.
Suggestion: this evening
...d you my detailed report on the same by today evening. Yours sincerely, Madhulika Banerji
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, so, well, you know, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 4.92783505155 203% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1047.0 937.175257732 112% => OK
No of words: 223.0 206.0 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69506726457 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68637189145 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 127.690721649 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618834080717 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 324.9 290.88556701 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.9754370014 44.8134815571 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.7857142857 76.5299724578 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9285714286 16.8248392259 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.07142857143 4.34317383033 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220352775767 0.216113520407 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0708222816897 0.0766984524023 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0814817867085 0.0603063233224 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123923035754 0.12726935374 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0717570526638 0.0580467560999 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 8.37731958763 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.68 8.71597938144 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 41.2886597938 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.