Some prefer to stay in a small town, while others prefer to live in a big city. Which do you prefer?
To live in a small town or big city depends on personal taste and preference. Both have their advantages and disadvantages. Being an outdoorsy person, I like to live in big cities. Small towns are quiet, simple not much hustle and bustle, and many people like to live in a quiet and simple place. Big cities usually have a lot of noise pollution, fast life, and competition.
I am a person who brings my best under pressure and competition, so big cities can get the best professional person out of me. I like challenges and want to do my best in whatever I do. I am a hardworking person so I feel I would get a lot of opportunities in big cities. I remember when I just graduated from dental school, I had my first interview for a job, there were many applications for the same job. The clinic I had applied for was one of the best in my city, I knew I would learn a lot there. During the interview, I convinced my employer that I would work extra hours and shadow all the best working dentists, and would be responsible toward my patients. I got the job, also I did my best for the clinic for all the years I worked there.
Apart from being hardworking and sincere, I like watching movies and live music concerts, I go to city marathons every year and attend all the festivals and celebrations happening in the city. This is the biggest advantage of living in cities I feel. Since childhood, I have been a huge fan of Taylor Swift, Selena Gomez, and many other artists. I have fun-filled memory of attending a Taylor Swift concert with my friends. I feel in cities I have a good work-life balance. Attending city festivals like Garba (Gujarat folk dance) is what I look forward to every year. I meet my friends, get dressed, we have a lot of good food and have gala time doing folk dances in a group.
Hence not one but I have multiple reasons to live in a city. Maybe some years down the line when I get older, I would like a quiet simple place to live. Our priorities change with different phases of life. I would think then of moving to a small town. But for now, I am happy, competitive, energetic, and thriving in the city I live.
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Suggestion: Hence,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, look, may, so, then, apart from, i feel
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 48.0 43.0788530466 111% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1745.0 1977.66487455 88% => OK
No of words: 402.0 407.700716846 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.3407960199 4.8611393121 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47771567384 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59130082762 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.509950248756 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 558.0 618.680645161 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 21.0 9.59856630824 219% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.3848783837 48.9658058833 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.7083333333 100.406767564 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.75 20.6045352989 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.83333333333 5.45110844103 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14155626358 0.236089414692 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0503457707317 0.076458572812 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0507095176513 0.0737576698707 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105328899413 0.150856017488 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0545077599058 0.0645574589148 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 11.7677419355 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 58.1214874552 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.6 10.9000537634 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.34 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 86.8835125448 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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