Dear sir and madam
I am writing to you in the hope that you can allow me working for the head office in the next six months.
As you know, I have been working in our company for the past five years. With the development of the company, I feel my leadership skills are not good enough to lead our team.so I think working for the head office is an opportunity for me to broaden my horizons and gain experience of different working environment and practice within our industry.
If it could be possible, oliva would be able to handle my work. As my assistant, she has had previous dealing with related work. In addition, if have any urgent or difficult work, I will provide support in the remote.
I would be very grateful if you could arrange for my transfer to the head office. I am looking forward to your response.
Yours sincerely
Leo
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- In some countries, a few people earn extremely high salaries. Some people think that this is good for a country, while others believe that the government should control salaries and limit the amount people can earn.Discuss both views and give your opinion 67
- Some universities now offer their courses on the Internet so that people can study online. Is this a positive or negative development? 56
- In some area of the US, a ‘curfew’ is imposed, in which teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult.What is your opinion on this? 80
- Some people believe that school children should not be given homework by their teachers, whereas others argue that homework plays an important role in the education of children. Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion. 61
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, i feel, i think, in addition, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 704.0 937.175257732 75% => OK
No of words: 155.0 206.0 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.54193548387 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52844152537 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46824578453 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 127.690721649 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.632258064516 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 216.0 290.88556701 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.4679245832 44.8134815571 157% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.2222222222 76.5299724578 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2222222222 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.77777777778 4.34317383033 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.374871291756 0.216113520407 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.141679656776 0.0766984524023 185% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0692195541445 0.0603063233224 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.21948350827 0.12726935374 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0743766565434 0.0580467560999 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 8.37731958763 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.76 8.71597938144 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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