With the development of technology, some devices such as smartphone and tablets become common. Some people think that we can watch movies on these intelligent devices instead of going to the cinema. Others think that to be really liked movies must be seen in a theatre. In my opinion, there is probably some truth to both arguments.
For most of the people, there is no need to go to the cinema when they can watch these movies on the phone or tablet. One of the main benefits of this is cheap. Compared with watching movies at the cinema, video websites such as Youtube or Dailymotion only require 5-10 dollars each month, also you can enjoy hundreds of movies. Another benefit of it is convenience, we can enjoy these movies anywhere and anytime such as commuter time or little break time. If something happens we can stop it and watch the film again after address related issues.
However, the cinema will not be replaced by smart devices. For some international famous films such as Harry Potter, Transformers and Resident evil, we highly recommend watching at the cinema, because the cinema will offer a more comfortable and peaceful environment with an enormous screen and high quality of sounds. At the same time, we can enjoy some snacks easily such as popcorn and coke. By the way, the cinema also is a good place for meeting with friends.
As discussed above, the cinema and smart devices cater to the needs of different people. It does not mean that people who watch movies on the devices will not go to the cinema. For myself, I like to watch movies on the devices most of the time, but I also go to the cinema when a great film has been released.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, really, so, such as, by the way, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1375.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.64527027027 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37751203125 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.537162162162 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 436.5 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.7924314613 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.9375 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.375 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219350064339 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.082180641251 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0720755939458 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149095508473 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0464728340131 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.0946893788 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.69 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.68 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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